when people go in to her caverns and die she brings them back to life but thay can not leve the caverns in witch she Romes the people loos all memory of Thar past life and until they serve the queen for so long they do not git thos memorizes back. her favorit of her disciples git speshel ear rings in wich she self wares to know whar they are and what they are doing.
When the lost souls of the dead wander into her lusterous cavern, she revives them as gem versions of themselves. The living stones cannot leave the cave in which they will forever roam. All wandering souls lose their memories and idea of the lives they led before, slowly, until they have served the Queen for long enough to mindlessly work without any idea of what is happening around them or what they just did. There is no way for the gem-souls to regain their memories. The Queen's favorite dispicles recieve earrings crafted by the Queen herself. The earrings give back the person's idea of who they were. She is as old as the first splinter of diamond to form.
whenever someone replies, I will pick the one I like best and continue the story.
You spot her sleeping, curled into herself on rounded stones, lining a starry river reflecting the painted night sky. A murky, sickly sweet aroma drifts from the lazy river. The rocks have a slight green wash where the gurgling water had hit many times, lapping water trying to reach up. The stones are shiny, washed with slimy water with snail shells littering the edge of the water, some slowly creeping along and others stuck, in death. A rustle hits your senses from behind, and you can barely make out the shape of a stray squirrel in the starlight.Her face tells the story of the dreams playing in her head. From what you observe, you think she is having a nightmare. You watch her writhe and whimper, as the light of the pale cornflower moon reflects off an identical, shining mark on her forehead. She appears to be slipping into the murky blue. Her tusks shine. Her face screws.
She promptly falls off the rock, onto the unruly grass. That looks like it cushioned her fall...?
"Um, I'm so sorry... Oh! I was about to fall off again... The last time that happened I floated down into a village of humans...They chased me out. No harm done, but it was rude... and unnecessary..."
"I'm Draumur, by the way. That means dream. Mostly because I can't keep my head out of the clouds..."
"O-oh... that's a pretty name! If you don't mind me asking..."
Draumur gets up, brushing the bits of dead grass off of her legs.
"Can you at least point me in the direction home? I have no idea where my village is, and from what I've heard, i-it's nowhere near here..."
It looks like there are tears welling in the corners of her eyes. When they start to roll down her cheeks, the color is that of the sky at noon, and the consistency is something like honey.
"Snnff... So... what do y-you say? Will you help me back home?"
She continues to slip, and promptly falls onto the sharper rocks in the river, and doesn't get up. A a creamy pale purple liquid starts to seep from her head. Try again, and save her? If you don't she is going to die, and you will lose all your beloved Jenga blocks.
She's coughing rapidly, bits of pebbles, river grass, and murky water coming out of her mouth to no end. It seems like she doesn't know what's happening, and keeps coughing, and crying. The blue, honey-like liquid streaming down her cheeks is beautiful color, the color of her eyes when she opens them. Her hair is soggy and matted, from a mix of the river water and the purple substance, still leaking from the back of her skull.
She's sobbing now.
The coughs are getting louder, harsher, causing more purple to spurt from her head, resulting in louder sobs, and faster tears. The endless sobbing keeps her from breathing right when the tears pool in her open, screaming mouth. And so she keeps coughing.
Occupation: greek siren/one of The Water Demon Queen's favorets
loves to hide in the fog and stock her pray so she can kill them with her hands and bring them to the water demon queen to feest. related to Celica Verona. only becam a siren/demon to save her sister from the underworld.
Most of the queens only pick up a few humans. Some to eat, some to keep. Then, Celica was picked. She worked hard to survive. Bad slaves get eaten by their king or queen. The queen recognized her and picked her as a "pet" to keep around. The favorites get specially necklaces so their king or queen knows where they are. Everyone told Celica to not go outside during a full moon, but she didn't listen. Now, she's trapped in the underworld.
Name: Etheria Vodaros
Age: As old as the oldest drops of water that ever landed on Earth
Occupation: The Water Demon Queen
She rules over every drop of water in the universe. This includes the other forms of water too. (ice, vapor, etc.) She likes messing with the tides of the ocean. She makes the waves crash onto ships, killing the people on it, but making a nice snack too. They are soggy though, which sucks. She only picks a handful of people each full moon.
(these ones were kind of underwhelming in terms of the outfit department)
After Samantha's sad death, Alisa tried to step up for her little sister and lead her legacy. Alisa already loved getting into fights so that was a start. There is a legend that a siren would call out to you when midnight strikes on a full moon.A month after the news,Alisa and a couple of 9th graders went out to the beach to tell if the legend was real.Well.. they shouldn't have done that as soon as Alisa stepped a foot near the ocean,a webbed hand grabbed her and started dragging her into the ocean.The others ran instead of helping.....Alisa started crying and her last words were "Atleast I was like you sis." She succumbed to death of drowning.
Before:
After:
Now she swims the ocean as a wandering siren....When she comes across a boy,she blushes.-w-
An unlucky little soul. She crossed paths with the Astral Queen at the wrong time. Usually, the queen was in her gold and purple palace. But that night, there was a full moon, where demons run amok on the streets of the overworld. She happened to stumble upon the Queen of the Stars herself. Rather than eating her, she decided to make Selene her slave. Now, she serves the queen, fulfilling her every need. She's become the queen's favorite.
Name: Astrania Remibualo
Age: As old as the oldest living stars
Occupation: The Astral Demon Queen
She is one of twelve demon kings and queens in the underworld. They rule over different domains that they have chosen. She decided to rule over the stars above in the sky. Every full moon, one of the twelve go up to observe the the overworld. Sometimes, they bring back "pets" from the overworld. One night, Astrania met Selene. She decided to bring her back as a souvenir from the overworld. Soon, Selene became Astrania's favorite. Selene worked harder than any other slaves she brought back. So, she kept her around.
Cause of death: Brute force to the abdominal area, ruptured organs, and multiple stab wounds piercing the skull.
Samantha was that girl that everyone wanted to be, but never could. She had an unending supply of bravery, that never served her well, as the things that she was brave enough to do were things that gave the most brutal consequences. She had been dared to pierce her skin, leaving her with an eyebrow piercing that her parents never would agree with. When the rain had just stopped one day, someone in the school cafeteria had told her that he would give Samantha $15 if she climbed to the top of the slippery boulders that were hard enough to climb when dry. The kid was testing her, seeing where the extent of her mindless bravery stopped. And of course she took him up on the offer. When recess was announced after lunch, every 8th grader ran out to see her pull the stunt. And so Samantha started the treacherous, slimy, climb. Eventually, after many falls, bruises, and tiny cuts, she made it to the top. She yelled out her victory while the kid started to pull the dollars out of his wallet. Samantha then deciding she would take the stunt even farther. The school kids watched as she slowly stood up on the slippery, uneven rocks. They gasped as she slipped over her untied boot laces- and plunged onto the smaller, sharper rocks. She was rushed to the hospital right away. Her body had hit first, causing them to bleed, and needed surgery due to the bleeding and the fact that one of her lungs had holes in it from the sharp boulders. Her face had hit after, the eyebrow piercing lodging itself into her skin from the impact. Her upper lip had been torn, and there was blood constantly pouring out of her mouth, like juice from a pitcher. As she lay in the cot, in the clean, white hospital bedroom after the surgery, the pain of it all was unbearable. The pain of her organs, preventing her from eating, the pain of her head, from the concussion and her lip, and the pain of existing like this. It was torture, and she wanted to escape. There was still operating tools on the wheeled table next to her. She knew she was going to die anyway, did she want to die slowly, in a hospital bed? No. She going to pull one last stunt. Samantha slowly swung her legs over the cot, (thank god they didn't take as much impact) and fumbled her way over to the table. She grabbed the large scalpel. One last stunt. One last stunt to show them all. She bit her lips, and plunged the surgical knife into her head. The pain was awful, her eyes blanking out, the tears welling in the corners of her eyes. She stabbed again. And again. And again. She couldn't see, the pain was so sharp. But she stumbled quickly down the clean hospital halls. She started to pick up pace as her legs got used to running. She heard nurses give chase, and then
everything
went
dark
Now she stays on this earth as a demon, whispering ideas into other's ears, giving them the bravery to stupidly do fatal stunts.
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hello
i created this
name:Himari Sakura
age:ass old as the diamond in her chest
Occupation:The demon queen of diamons
when people go in to her caverns and die she brings them back to life but thay can not leve the caverns in witch she Romes the people loos all memory of Thar past life and until they serve the queen for so long they do not git thos memorizes back. her favorit of her disciples git speshel ear rings in wich she self wares to know whar they are and what they are doing.
as old as the diamond in her chest i cant buleve it ato curected that to that wored
i'm so sorry guys.:-(
Can I detail this writing a bit?
When the lost souls of the dead wander into her lusterous cavern, she revives them as gem versions of themselves. The living stones cannot leave the cave in which they will forever roam. All wandering souls lose their memories and idea of the lives they led before, slowly, until they have served the Queen for long enough to mindlessly work without any idea of what is happening around them or what they just did. There is no way for the gem-souls to regain their memories. The Queen's favorite dispicles recieve earrings crafted by the Queen herself. The earrings give back the person's idea of who they were. She is as old as the first splinter of diamond to form.
She is the Demon Queen of Gems.
i love it
i made the sister of the queen demon for fandomhopper
name:valey Hiyama
Age:ever sens she cot the eyes of a lover
Occupation:The Love demon queen's sister
I love it!!
Spelling, please.
im triying
Do you at least have spellcheck?
yes i do and i use it but my computer is stoopid.XD
Oof, that sucks. I mostly to stuff on my phone, and since I type really fast I constantly have to go back and correct spelling.
okay what the heck I wasn't expecting people to be inspired by me
it's not bad but I'm pretty surprised I had an impact
also all of the kings and queens are basically brothers and sisters
whenever someone replies, I will pick the one I like best and continue the story.
You spot her sleeping, curled into herself on rounded stones, lining a starry river reflecting the painted night sky. A murky, sickly sweet aroma drifts from the lazy river. The rocks have a slight green wash where the gurgling water had hit many times, lapping water trying to reach up. The stones are shiny, washed with slimy water with snail shells littering the edge of the water, some slowly creeping along and others stuck, in death. A rustle hits your senses from behind, and you can barely make out the shape of a stray squirrel in the starlight.Her face tells the story of the dreams playing in her head. From what you observe, you think she is having a nightmare. You watch her writhe and whimper, as the light of the pale cornflower moon reflects off an identical, shining mark on her forehead. She appears to be slipping into the murky blue. Her tusks shine. Her face screws.
What
do
you
do?
Star:shakes the girl awake*Ma'am are you k?Hello?
(this is star)
"Huh? What? WAHH!"
She promptly falls off the rock, onto the unruly grass. That looks like it cushioned her fall...?
"Um, I'm so sorry... Oh! I was about to fall off again... The last time that happened I floated down into a village of humans...They chased me out. No harm done, but it was rude... and unnecessary..."
"I'm Draumur, by the way. That means dream. Mostly because I can't keep my head out of the clouds..."
And you are...?
"I'm Star!I am the trickster of stars"
"O-oh... that's a pretty name! If you don't mind me asking..."
Draumur gets up, brushing the bits of dead grass off of her legs.
"Can you at least point me in the direction home? I have no idea where my village is, and from what I've heard, i-it's nowhere near here..."
It looks like there are tears welling in the corners of her eyes. When they start to roll down her cheeks, the color is that of the sky at noon, and the consistency is something like honey.
"Snnff... So... what do y-you say? Will you help me back home?"
you are so good at telling stories
Aww, thanks!
stack Jenga blocks on her head
She continues to slip, and promptly falls onto the sharper rocks in the river, and doesn't get up. A a creamy pale purple liquid starts to seep from her head. Try again, and save her? If you don't she is going to die, and you will lose all your beloved Jenga blocks.
save her
I found those Jenga blocks in the river
She's coughing rapidly, bits of pebbles, river grass, and murky water coming out of her mouth to no end. It seems like she doesn't know what's happening, and keeps coughing, and crying. The blue, honey-like liquid streaming down her cheeks is beautiful color, the color of her eyes when she opens them. Her hair is soggy and matted, from a mix of the river water and the purple substance, still leaking from the back of her skull.
She's sobbing now.
The coughs are getting louder, harsher, causing more purple to spurt from her head, resulting in louder sobs, and faster tears. The endless sobbing keeps her from breathing right when the tears pool in her open, screaming mouth. And so she keeps coughing.
It's an endless cycle of pain, fear, and sadness.
End it?
End the cycle? If so, yes
i wack her up and see if shes ok then i ask her if she needs eney help
i am a nears after all.
"Huh? What? WAHH!"
"O-oh, are you a nurse? Can you help me?"
The girl tries to climb down from the rock, but promptly falls off.
"Ow... Oh... My knee hurts.... You wouldn't happen to have an ice pack, or something? Because you are a nurse and all..."
I created a queen demon for fandomhopper
Name:Aiko Hiyama
Age:Ever since first love
Occupation:The Love demon queen
what woleed you do if you went in a creepey bilding and fawend this laying in the wndow
1. please try to spell.
2. leave and try not to make noise.
1. ok 0w0
2. it wacks up and chases you out the doer it pawns and hugs you
* It wakes up and chases you out of the door
thank you for correcting me. :-)
Thank you for trying to spell. :O)
Pet the kitty
it pers
picks it up*Mine now*continues exploration*
befor
After
Demon
Name: Leucosia Verona
Age :17-18
Occupation: greek siren/one of The Water Demon Queen's favorets
loves to hide in the fog and stock her pray so she can kill them with her hands and bring them to the water demon queen to feest. related to Celica Verona. only becam a siren/demon to save her sister from the underworld.
btw the kings and queens only have one favorite
just saying
Ok so everyone,Imagine you're walking in the woods and then you find this...
What would you do?
i woled triy to be frends with her and asck her haw she got her har that way...
She wakes up startled but seems nice........she told you that nature shaped her hair*
we woled probuley be bffs
poke it with a stick
or if I'm with my dog see what he does
1. *she wakes up startled*
2. *she sees the dog and gets scared*
3. *my dog drags me away as he runs after her*
he is a good boy though
but to be real i would try to see if she's alive
welp first response she kills your dog but second response she is rlly nice
don't kill my good boy
You clicked a "ramdomize" button?Why?
to see what it wold look like i thot to my self that if i clicked it that wold be what i wold look like like as a demon
Before
After
Name: Celica Verona
Age: 18-19ish
Occupation: The Water Queen's favorite "pet"
Most of the queens only pick up a few humans. Some to eat, some to keep. Then, Celica was picked. She worked hard to survive. Bad slaves get eaten by their king or queen. The queen recognized her and picked her as a "pet" to keep around. The favorites get specially necklaces so their king or queen knows where they are. Everyone told Celica to not go outside during a full moon, but she didn't listen. Now, she's trapped in the underworld.
Name: Etheria Vodaros
Age: As old as the oldest drops of water that ever landed on Earth
Occupation: The Water Demon Queen
She rules over every drop of water in the universe. This includes the other forms of water too. (ice, vapor, etc.) She likes messing with the tides of the ocean. She makes the waves crash onto ships, killing the people on it, but making a nice snack too. They are soggy though, which sucks. She only picks a handful of people each full moon.
(these ones were kind of underwhelming in terms of the outfit department)
i love it. is my one the favorites of The Water Demon Queen?
#Waterdemons
this is her befor
i just made the thang that killed her
Name: Alisa Chesterfeild
Age of death:15
Cause of death:Well...find out
Inspiration:lemonn and fandomhopper
After Samantha's sad death, Alisa tried to step up for her little sister and lead her legacy. Alisa already loved getting into fights so that was a start. There is a legend that a siren would call out to you when midnight strikes on a full moon.A month after the news,Alisa and a couple of 9th graders went out to the beach to tell if the legend was real.Well.. they shouldn't have done that as soon as Alisa stepped a foot near the ocean,a webbed hand grabbed her and started dragging her into the ocean.The others ran instead of helping.....Alisa started crying and her last words were "Atleast I was like you sis." She succumbed to death of drowning.
Before:
After:
Now she swims the ocean as a wandering siren....When she comes across a boy,she blushes.-w-
Demon:
love it i made the thang that killed her she used to be human to
I had inspiration from you to so thank you
oooo my goddd
it's always been my dream for something I created to inspire someone to do something of their own
also that's cool bro now samantha isn't a lonely demon
Yup!Thank you for inspiration
wow can't believe I inspired a few peeps
YE
Cute .w
i have a dog named bobo
99% sure that's a stock photo
where my grandma lives if a apartment and there back yard is a forest i posted it on google
you are pritey
and this is a lesson from your neighborhood NB steven, to never show your face on the internet
well...... that great
thx you
i think she should be sponge bob but as a girl
nice
Genderbend.
Sponge Bob and Patrick.
Oh sorry,i forget a genderbend version plankton!
Name:Clara
This 2 bugs in her head-this is a her pets!
Candy-girl
Witch-ghost.
Before
After
Name: Selene Hishai
Age: 17-18ish
Occupation: A slave to the Astral Queen
An unlucky little soul. She crossed paths with the Astral Queen at the wrong time. Usually, the queen was in her gold and purple palace. But that night, there was a full moon, where demons run amok on the streets of the overworld. She happened to stumble upon the Queen of the Stars herself. Rather than eating her, she decided to make Selene her slave. Now, she serves the queen, fulfilling her every need. She's become the queen's favorite.
Name: Astrania Remibualo
Age: As old as the oldest living stars
Occupation: The Astral Demon Queen
She is one of twelve demon kings and queens in the underworld. They rule over different domains that they have chosen. She decided to rule over the stars above in the sky. Every full moon, one of the twelve go up to observe the the overworld. Sometimes, they bring back "pets" from the overworld. One night, Astrania met Selene. She decided to bring her back as a souvenir from the overworld. Soon, Selene became Astrania's favorite. Selene worked harder than any other slaves she brought back. So, she kept her around.
(the flowers on her face are moonflowers)
I just like writing stories like this
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
should I make all 6 queens? I can't make male characters ;-;
you guys can leave the kings to your own imagination and make them if ya want
yes
if you're the one to make the stories I would love to be the one to illustrate them (Г°w°)Г🎨
Omg it's so pretty!Do you think I can make a story like you?
If you try hard enough and have fun, you can do it!
If you don't have fun, it's gonna be a blob of sadness.
If you don't try hard enough, it's gonna be a blob of bad effort.
If you don't do either, it's not gonna be a blob, it's gonna be a void of nothingness.
Keep the colors at a minimum, try hard, and have fun :)
Thank you
Edit:I made a story and I hope you can read it
can I draw the queens
plot twist
eh sure why not
using the most detailed clothing for my first pair was a mistake
now the rest look like crap because I want all of them to have unique outfits
Awwww
i mashed evereythang i like
SO CUTE
I made art i think
source
hay cold you drawl my fallen angel
Just to let you know i do not normally do requests. but yeah, i'll draw her! :ó)
that looks so cool! can I draw her?
yeah, go ahead! :ó)
aw yiss art time
he looks sweet. i have a dog named bane he looks like this.
that is the face of a very good boy indeed
i like it
i have kittens
this is my fallen angel i need a name for her if you guys wold like to give me some names and i will pick from them to marow
and can some one drall her
Pad ("fall"in bosnian)
i made your but its creepe and naw i thank it will come and kill me in my sleep....
it took me 5 minutes to dicipher what that said
please try to spell better
love it
Name: Samantha Chesterfeild
Age as of death: 14
Cause of death: Brute force to the abdominal area, ruptured organs, and multiple stab wounds piercing the skull.
Samantha was that girl that everyone wanted to be, but never could. She had an unending supply of bravery, that never served her well, as the things that she was brave enough to do were things that gave the most brutal consequences. She had been dared to pierce her skin, leaving her with an eyebrow piercing that her parents never would agree with. When the rain had just stopped one day, someone in the school cafeteria had told her that he would give Samantha $15 if she climbed to the top of the slippery boulders that were hard enough to climb when dry. The kid was testing her, seeing where the extent of her mindless bravery stopped. And of course she took him up on the offer. When recess was announced after lunch, every 8th grader ran out to see her pull the stunt. And so Samantha started the treacherous, slimy, climb. Eventually, after many falls, bruises, and tiny cuts, she made it to the top. She yelled out her victory while the kid started to pull the dollars out of his wallet. Samantha then deciding she would take the stunt even farther. The school kids watched as she slowly stood up on the slippery, uneven rocks. They gasped as she slipped over her untied boot laces- and plunged onto the smaller, sharper rocks. She was rushed to the hospital right away. Her body had hit first, causing them to bleed, and needed surgery due to the bleeding and the fact that one of her lungs had holes in it from the sharp boulders. Her face had hit after, the eyebrow piercing lodging itself into her skin from the impact. Her upper lip had been torn, and there was blood constantly pouring out of her mouth, like juice from a pitcher. As she lay in the cot, in the clean, white hospital bedroom after the surgery, the pain of it all was unbearable. The pain of her organs, preventing her from eating, the pain of her head, from the concussion and her lip, and the pain of existing like this. It was torture, and she wanted to escape. There was still operating tools on the wheeled table next to her. She knew she was going to die anyway, did she want to die slowly, in a hospital bed? No. She going to pull one last stunt. Samantha slowly swung her legs over the cot, (thank god they didn't take as much impact) and fumbled her way over to the table. She grabbed the large scalpel. One last stunt. One last stunt to show them all. She bit her lips, and plunged the surgical knife into her head. The pain was awful, her eyes blanking out, the tears welling in the corners of her eyes. She stabbed again. And again. And again. She couldn't see, the pain was so sharp. But she stumbled quickly down the clean hospital halls. She started to pick up pace as her legs got used to running. She heard nurses give chase, and then
everything
went
dark
Now she stays on this earth as a demon, whispering ideas into other's ears, giving them the bravery to stupidly do fatal stunts.
before:
after:
demon:
thats scary 0-0
glad you liked it!
that was a lot of reading OwO THANKS FOR GIVING ME NEW NIGHTMARES ;)
It's what I was going for UwU
i was being sarcastic.But i LOVE the story btw.LOVE IT.Man i sware you could be a very famous authe
I would like to polish it a bit, since it's not perfect, but maybe I could let you read my story about spider-people
i was being sarcastic.But i LOVE the story btw.LOVE IT.Man i sware you could be a very famous auther
if I come up with more nightmare stuff I will post in in this thread! probably. unless I get yelled at for keeping this one going haha
so does this mean you're planning on continuing this nightmare run?
yessiree
spoopy
they call me the fastest spook in the west
judging by your profile, are you a fellow ace
aw yea boi
AW YISSSS WE EXIST EVEN ON ITCH
rad
I want to do story just like this!I'm inspired!
yehaa I've inspired creativity
edit: thanks for following me bro that means a lot❤
Edit:I made a story for you and fandomhopper
mcthankies from mcspankies
YE!